Dialectical Journal
Peer Edit
QUOTES
• There should be two quotes. If one is
missing write MISSING QUOTES
• Missing setup? Write NO SETUP
• Missing line #? Write LINE #??
• Punctuation leading into the quote? If
incorrect or missing, circle and fix it for
them.
• Incorrect formatting? Circle and write
NEED TO FIX
– “Suddenly I realize/ That…I would
break/ Into blossom” (ll. 22-24).
QUOTES
• Does the quote/example support
•
the topic? If not write DOES NOT
SUPPORT TOPIC
If the setup is weak or the quote
could be blended more, write
WORK ON SETUP
ANALYSIS
• Each quote should be followed by at
least two sentences of analysis. If not,
write TOO SHORT
• If the sentence is incomplete or a
fragment write AWK
• if I, me, my, we, us, our or you is used
circle it
ANALYSIS
• Are there key words from the question in
the analysis? If not write ADD KEY WORDS
FROM QUESTION
• Does the analysis make sense and explain:
1. How Wright used imagery?
• 2. How that image shows joy?